Feed back

My feed back for my last presentation befor My Final and most impotent one was... alright I gess.

I Fallowed all the Advice given from the last pitch and planed what I would say made sure to memorise the names of animators and important names as memory is somthing I am week on. and completly changed my story idea.

However! I was extramly nervuse, shaky and offten found my self not saying anything when I had so much to say. My nerves got the better of me and I dont think this has happend befor...

none the less, the lecheres didnt seem to menten it in my feed back but I knew I was jumpy so I may need to practice keeping calm.

The feedback that was given how ever was; they liked the new direction and story and could see a clearer path for my thinking and ideas. However I should be carefull not to make my animation to symbolic so no one knows whats going on in the hole animation.

I also shouldn't mention things I have done previous to this, not because it isnt impotent but because in my final presentation this distracts from the main point I need to bring across in my final presentation.

They did like my new story and its powerful message. however they where unsure about the ending and was thinking that it should be something else like death... I was not fond of this as the last secen was ment to be a resolution and not a tragedy.

Presentation feed back

 Due to Resent events, I will admit my presentation was not as preperd or professorial as i would have liked. My Dyslexia and stress of proforming made me forget a lot of names and information i know and make me look a lot less knowledgeable on my topic than I really am.
However this may sound like a sad point I will not let it bring me down and Learn for the Future, A list of important names and terms I may use wright down on Paper to help me on my way.

Along with that I did Received a lot of good information.

It was commented that my Animations and research looked more focused on the Aesthetic of the animation rather than limited animation for television. It seems my lecheres are worried that if I focused to much on budgeting and the limitations that are bright along with TV animation, that It will hold me back fir what i can realy do, as this is not chalinging.

It was advised that I maby concentrate more on aesthetic in animation than the limitations so I am more free to explore my topic. and even tho my research point has changed everything I have already Research is still valid and useful for me to continue.

I was hoping more to concentrate on the marketing and production as this it what i hope for as a future corer, it is true that this hold me back and i would be better with a much more inexpressive portfolio than numbers and figures.

 So I am changing for a more artistic direction for I am an artiest and a animator, not a businessman or mathmatishion.

Much like the animated movie, book of Kell^ the art of the animation is based on the original book of kell. Showing how a visual style can help the apple and push the story.

It was also stayed that my story (with the milk) seemed a little cleshay, like he had already seen it befor. My story is not the most original, but I liked it Generic quality. However as i am now changing my Main Objective this story is not appropite for it any way.

They said they enjoyed the story with my Chess board characters more...However...I realy dont like the chess idea. The chracters yes but the story feels dry and ..bllah...

So I may agein need to find a New story... hmm.

Straight after my presentation I went to book stors to look at children illistraters whos styles inspired me, (I will add the list latter)
But whill looking I relised It is not a Childs storry I want to animate so logicly this kind of ilistration is the wrong thing to look at, but it was still good Reserch in to there style. why cant we have more stylised animations like childrens books but theamd for adults.

Pitch feedback

Crit week Review

The Pitch whet well with more direction and clear thought on where i am going with my project. as well as i felt more confident in my presentation skills.

Feed back:
They all seemed happy with the small examples i had made and agreed i had more of a cleare idea.

Where to improve:
More Research and information. Better explain the positives and vegiteves of the tests i have done.

Things to look up:
Look up European animations (Bellgrade school) and flebus- lotie Riniger?

Progress perspiration Feed back week 4

For my first personification i was a lot more scared and nervous than i normally am for presentations. And i think this may have effected my representation of my idea.  Hopefully i will be less high-strung for my next presentation.

However my feedback was very useful and gave me more direction in my subject and what i should be doing next.

They seemd to agree with my actions on changing my research subject as it was not really what i was interesting in. However they also thing that i shouldn't bring in the budgeting of animations, perhaps more on limited animation.

They also wonderd what my age group would be? should it be only childrens animation i look at? I in all honesty still don't know the ancer to this question. i would like to look at all animation for television but this will probably be to big.

Things i was advised to look up:

• Limited animations
• Cartoon modern (book)
• Bill plympton (animator)
• Do more case studies
• LOTS of animation