Feed back

My feed back for my last presentation befor My Final and most impotent one was... alright I gess.

I Fallowed all the Advice given from the last pitch and planed what I would say made sure to memorise the names of animators and important names as memory is somthing I am week on. and completly changed my story idea.

However! I was extramly nervuse, shaky and offten found my self not saying anything when I had so much to say. My nerves got the better of me and I dont think this has happend befor...

none the less, the lecheres didnt seem to menten it in my feed back but I knew I was jumpy so I may need to practice keeping calm.

The feedback that was given how ever was; they liked the new direction and story and could see a clearer path for my thinking and ideas. However I should be carefull not to make my animation to symbolic so no one knows whats going on in the hole animation.

I also shouldn't mention things I have done previous to this, not because it isnt impotent but because in my final presentation this distracts from the main point I need to bring across in my final presentation.

They did like my new story and its powerful message. however they where unsure about the ending and was thinking that it should be something else like death... I was not fond of this as the last secen was ment to be a resolution and not a tragedy.